托福獨立口語高頻話題講師批改實例分享：Describe a special experience...
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考生在備考獨立口語時可能練習了不少口語話題，但因為缺乏有效批改，就連自己也不知道練習到底有沒有成效。下面小編就來分享一些來自托福資深講師針對獨立口語高頻話題學生答案的專業批改。
本期托福獨立口語高頻話題
Describe a special experience that has changed your life.
學生對此話題的表述答案
One special experience I have is that last summer vacation, I participated in a program to be a community sponsored teacher in a mountain area. Though life there was very tough. The time I spend there, I will never forget. From the light in the children's eye I knew that, not every one in this world could have the good condition like us to be well educated. so we should treasure what we have now to study hard and to be a useful person for the society.
資深講師批改意見
發音部分需注意的幾個詞(Pronunciation)
1 World
2 Study
3 It costs?
語法方面出現的錯誤(Grammar)
The time I spent thre I never forget I will never forget
改正：the time I spent there
2 light in children's eye
改正：light in children's eyes
表達部分存在的問題(Expression)
1 To be a useful person
改正：To be a contributing member of society
此高頻話題高分口語模板分享
One special experience that I had was last summer vacation when I participated in a program to be a teacher in a mountain area. The life style there was very tough, but I will never forget the light in the children's eyes. Seeing the children, I realized not everyone has the opportunity to receive a good education. Because of this, I realized we should treasure our opportunities and we should stuy hard and be a contributing member of society.
以上就是小編為大家分享的托福獨立口語高頻話題的學生解答和資深講師批改分析，希望能為大家帶來一些獨立口語回答方面的幫助。
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